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Passionately

When blood and ink
Combine,
Gods
Play on my bed –

Stripped off with their heavenly duties
Playing dirty tricks at virginal beauties,

Endowed with physique, sculpted in bronze
Flirtatious winks, leaving me with groans,

Cuddling…caressing, lust and love in my veins
Blood flows faster…spills passion, proof in stains.

When blood and ink
Combine,
Gods
Pray on my bed –

Gifted with music in ballads and strings
Delighting soaked bodies swimming in streams,

Singing sincere and solemn lyrical verses
Enthralling ordinary hearts with heavenly praises,

Crudely…cruelly, teaching rogues and ugly beasts
Gods bow, too…and bend their stubborn knees.

When blood and ink
Combine,
Gods…
Rest on my bed.

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  • Learning2PaintYou
    November 11, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry.


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 9, 2007

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    Wow...I love the way you have sculpted your words into such a wonderful piece of writing. I really can't think of the words to say, except..."WOW"

    ~jeremiC.


  • Amera gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    This is wonderful! What an amazing flow and meter you have composed for the dark intoneation. This is the work of a master poetess that can write in any genre.

    Love,
    Amera♥