Screaming,
children running
laughter and play
Joyful fun
finger painting
faces painted too
contentment
Author notes
Septolet
The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
Love you baby.
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A contest entry
- Delightful Shortforms by delightfulmess.
1200 points, ended October 21, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All those forms and styles (Quicky) by Meroza.
850 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This little poem is such a sweet joy to read. Makes me miss the times where I could run in the water holes along the road and just laugh of a silly rock.
Thank you for sharing this joy -
Awe what a fun filled Septolet
Excellent imagery packed in these words
Great job and thank you for entering the contest
delila
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so very e i see this with my brother and sister all the time
a wonderful write which holds much imagery within it
love the form
well done and best of luck
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yep.
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Yes indeed good fun.
Saw this with my kids this weekend.
great job on this form, and great content.
Best wishes in this contest.
Tory
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