Your eyes ignite me
set fire to my soul and heart
until love drowns my spirit.
Floating by your stare
flying on clouds of your words
praying this isn't a dream.
A contest entry
- Delightful Shortforms by delightfulmess.
1200 points, ended October 21, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sigh.... Oh what a nice Sedoka... Love the emotional
tie and the longing portrayed I can imagine such
wonderful things with these words.
delila
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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A nice sedoka, it shows the feelings and apprehension of the poet well.
Good luck in the contest.
Andrew -
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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I love it!
Best of luck in the contest! This is a winner for sure!
*PEACE*
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
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