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Metamorphosis



life...

the ultimate balancing act

our indulgences and fears
played against
    our true needs
              and desires

the ego vs the soul

and our vision
and understanding
in the balance

if we persevere
          we can

                                  climb out

of this

                  cocoon of chaos

and match the spirit step for step

                                          in balance

                    unafraid

satisfied

it is the very purpose

of

life...





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  • PerVirtuous gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    You are most perceptive. I love a woman with a brain. Do you have nice hooters and a round butt? You'd be perfect.

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 10, 2007
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    Sir ,I agree with your logic..a poetic logic I mean..thanks for the entry in my contest..

  • Amera gold member
    October 9, 2007
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    Metamorphosis is a biological process by which an animal physically develops after birth or hatching, involving a conspicuous and relatively abrupt change in the animal's form or structure through cell growth and differentiation. Some insects, amphibians, mollusks, crustaceans, cnidarians, echinoderms and tunicates undergo metamorphosis, which is usually (but not always) accompanied by a change of habitat or behavior.
    Scientific usage of the term is exclusive, and is not applied to general aspects of cell growth, including rapid growth spurts. References to "metamorphosis" in mammals are imprecise and only colloquial. Metamorphosis represents a change in taxon during development. Not sure what it means in poetry but I think it means that it doesn’t rhyme and it jumps around alot. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • PerVirtuous gold member
      October 9, 2007
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      I don't know, I didn't study biography

      • cheaphotelsign
        October 10, 2007

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        ...i dissected a frog once...impaled my middle finger trying to pin his leg down in the wax...that was the extent of my scienceiological experience...too dangerous

      • Amera gold member
        October 10, 2007

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        So you like traveling up the preverbal tributary without the common mode of propulsion? Remember that the illusion of one optic is as adequate as the inclination of the cranium to an equine quadruped devoid of his visionary capacity.

        • PerVirtuous gold member
          October 10, 2007
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          Propel, propel, propel your craft
          gently over the liquid solution
          ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically
          life is but an illusion

  • cheaphotelsign
    October 9, 2007
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    i am but a wee grasshopper fiddling songs of stupor in the shadow of your giant enlightening foot. you amaze me sometimes...well, most of the time......ok, dammit- all the freakin' time, alright! you happy now?!

  • Arzab
    October 9, 2007

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    Powerful write and makes a person think. Like, maybe life is better if we take chances because otherwise we might go through life always wondering what could have happened if we decided to do something when it's already too late to change what has been done. Good luck in the contest.

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