Oh my love
it was my supposition that
the florae is procreated in plants
and plants are located
on the earth
you are not a plant
yet you
impart a baby's breath of the spring
as while cherishing you
I beacon that
a lotus reciprocate it
Oh my love...
A contest entry
- Red by ashjoe76.
1050 points, ended October 28, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love. by I will stand by you.
600 points, ended October 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF - Quickie - Adult by Dragonsong.
525 points, ended October 30, 2007, 10 entries
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A very nice write - very deep and moving.. thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
DragonSong
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great.
There are some words I will have to look up... lol, but this was a great write.
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beautiful
very unusual and sweet. congrats. -
this was beautiful
and some what mysterious too
leaving one to think
as you never mentioned in the end
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This is short and sweet...like the fragrance of flowers, subtle yet lingering...I have always believed that flowers can speak to and for us, when our words fail...a gift of the Creator...Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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So verywell done my friend
what a amazing write
to captivate such beauty without
saying it by name
Wonderful Good luck my friend
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This is a captivating poem so well composed in free verse. A wonderful take on the prompt as you express vividly the color red in nature and human emotion and never mention it by name. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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