I stand in my room
Listening
To see if anyone
Will hear my screams.
I thrust my head
Into my pillow
And let my tears flow
But after tonight
My pain will be gone
And no one will know
The pain I feel.
After i hear
Everyone asleep
I get up
And i sneak
into the bathroom
and take a blade
Against my wrist
To take the pain
I drag the blade Slowly
Across my arm
And then my pain
Is finally gone
I don't want to die
I just want relief
I want to survive
But it doesn't seem
To stop to bleed
It hurts now
I never expected this
I wonder how
It could hurt like this
My blood flows more
Than ever before
My cut is to deep
I want pain anymore
I feel so gone
So out of life
I didn't want
To commit suicide.
But my friend
Don't cry for me
Even though i fucked up
I'm finally free
A contest entry
- Pain and Depression by thedevilsgirl.
475 points, ended November 16, 2007, 55 entries
Gold trophy winner
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i like this one it covers how i feel 99.9% of he time
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this is awesome...
Cutting can sometimes be the only way to relieve pain but then again for me Cutting is my oly way
congratz on the Trophy
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omg!!!
the only word that comes to mind is WOW!!!! where did you get this inspiration??? the emotion just leaps off the page.
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Aww,depressing...full of emotion and deep anger...
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i like it... its really good...
has to be my favorite one so far.. -
this is a really good peom,
i can relate 100%
i feel like this often,
and try to commit suicide alot,
hope all is well,
love Elektra xxxxx
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Wow this is great! Really I love it!
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Powerful emotions you got going on here, you have expressed them really well. Superb write! Good luck in the contest!
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