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N[L]ight Elf

Iced eyes reflect nightly treasures
Kept secret through the swirling wind
A beauty beyond human measures
Lives where light does not descend

Eyes foretelling of immortatlity
Pierce through the shadows of darkest hour
The cold eyes of elf replaying the fatality
Of those who come to seek its power

Iced eyes reflect nightly treasures
Given to those who find her... in the light

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  • Naridill
    October 10, 2007

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    Beautiful. A creative output from the picture prompt. The words flow very nicely and create a beautiful flow.

    Thanks for entering and much luck.