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Art thou with me?

Oh lord! I thank thee
For thee hath helped me
Mercy, thee pray I,
For sins hath done I
But lord, thy kindness I salute
As thou doth forgive my misdeeds.

Thou art my love, lord.
Thou art my best friend
What should do me, to make thee happy?
Wilt does whate’er thee asks forth
Coz’ thee doth naught make me sad.
Lord, wither e’er I go
I wouldn’t ask “Wherefore art thou, Lord”
Coz I know again,
That thee would be forever with me.

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  • Nuage
    October 9, 2007
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    Excellent! It's so hard to do Shakespearian (spelling?) well but that you did!