I fell so deep, deep into his arms
Without a care, I felt so safe
There I can share.
Share my life, completely open and free
Be who I want to be, who I am
I wish he could see.
See what I mean, when I say what I say.
Know I am true, here to the end
I know this is new
New to him and I, yet ended to soon
You see, he dumped me yesterday
Now I am just not me
I feel empty, abandoned, and imperfect
Not suitable for him, not even for me
Are future is dim.
I wasn’t settling, nor was it a mistake
I wanted us to be, gave him a chance
Now who is screwed… me.
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This is about my ex who just broke up with me. I gave up EVERYONE I had for him.... I gave up the life I was going to make work. Now I feel fucked over with nothing to show for it. He is the 7th person to break up with me before my birthday. I still like him a lot. I can not say I love him because I am still not sure about that but I do want to make it work with him.
WHATchaTHINK???
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A lot of pain and disappointment come from these lines. The style is very different, makes the reader stop and start, and think of what you are writing. I don't believe you should have to give up things you love for someone who loves you.
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i love this poem. it reminds me of the jackass in my past... but thats a poem of its own as well lol. you take care of yourself and screw what some guy says. if a guy says something sweet; it probubly isn't as true as he wants you to think it is.
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It is always great to see a work done with raw emotion that it is easy to sense the creators emotions. I obviously think you did a great job. as for the relationship, just remember sh*t happens and probably your better off with someone who would appreciate you. remember perfection is in the eyes of the beholder. good luck, hope I helped...
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I know too well how you feel. Always make you feel just a little better to put it in a poem, doesn't it? Good poem, and i noticed that the day you wrote this poem, is the day my love broke up with me....Still hurts doesn't it? Im sorry and I hope you feel better.
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I really like this I can relate. I just wrote a poem about my ex too called Passionate rape, check it out. I hate that feeling of a aguy crushing your heart and soul, but you know what guys are stupid and not worth my time
lol i knoe its hard but you kinda just have to move on. 99.9% of guys are assholes and the other 0.1% is just wierd. just goes to show you they arent worth it, the guy i was with said hed never do anything bad to me yet he let his "second brain" do the thinking like all other guys and well geuss what he made that sstatement into a lie. dont worry hun there are other fish in the sea.
great write
dont stop writing-it helps keeps us some what sane with all our jumbled up emotions bottled up inside us.
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IIts hard when you think you love someone and you give them your heart to have them throw it on the floor like it meant nothing. Stay strong.
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IIts hard when you think you love someone and you give them your heart to have them throw it on the floor like it meant nothing. Stay strong.
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great
very well expressed
and then they say "7 is lucky"
my ass!
8 is also some number with meaning. something devil-worshipping I think.
don't ponder on that. am just blabbing nonsense
either which way
everything is ruled by fate
hope for sure your fate will smile upon you soon
kisses, hugs and best wishes!
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This is an awsome poem. I can totally relate my boyfriend broke up with me just yesterday and I gave him everything I could at the time but It wasnt enough appartly so yet I still feel for him. Like I said this is an awsome poem.
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