Dear you,
I know you've been looking for me.
Your praying has been intense lately
And you have been getting angry.
I think it's time you understand the world
So let me take you in and show you the truth.
It wasn't long ago that you were born.
Your true love killed your soul, or so you think.
There is so much more to you than you know.
I am here to help you rise up to your true potential,
But I cannot stop you from demise.
You are everything you want to be
And that I can promise you inside and out.
Don't give up on your life
Don't give up on me.
I love you and I am here for you
Just please, call out and use me.
Then in the least of hope, you will find me
I wan't to help save you from the night.
Please, give me a chance. Let me be your help
your savior.
I love you and I only want the best.
Let me make you strong.
Let me in.
Don't give up. I love you!
Keep well and be well,
God
Author notes
Entered for a contest. I'm guessing that if god were to write me a letter, this is what god would say.
A contest entry
- A Letter From God To Man by Naridill.
300 points, ended October 23, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awesome
I really felt like you were talking to me, it brought tears to my eyes, you are so much better writer than I. Keep up the great work.
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1. I thought you didn't believe in god...
2. I think this is more of a letter written by your true self to yourself. It shows a perfect scene of inner conflict. I like it. It's a flawless letter.
Great poem, another masterpiece.
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nice...
shows your belif
love you
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