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Crap

Crap, I’ve lost my mind
I know I’ve lost my mind
'Cause I seem to do things
At the wrong place at the wrong time

When I ‘m supposed to laugh
At people’s absurdity
And when people enjoy the illusions
Of material worldly desires
I cry, for reasons unknown
With pity, on their ignorance.

Crap, I’ve lost my mind
I know I’ve lost my mind
'Cause I seem to do things
At the wrong place at the wrong time

When I’m supposed to cry
When I’m depressed
And when I get fired
And when there’s no way for peace
I laugh, my head- off,
Like a joker of the cruel fate.

Crap, I’ve lost my mind
I know I’ve lost my mind
'Cause I seem to do things
At the wrong place at the wrong time

Call it a great idiocy,
Be it a mental case,
Or a psychic feeling,
Crap, that’s how I feel, doing things
At the wrong place, at the wrong time.




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  • Nuage
    October 9, 2007

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    This was really good, especially the last stanza. I can totally relate! You laugh at the sheer bad luck of everything and occasionally, the irony of it all.
    I didn't like 'coz' though, i much prefer 'cause'.
    But i think that's just me being a language nazi.


    • Jane24by7
      October 9, 2007
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      thnx for the comment.. actually the coz like u said is a language nazi. lol.. but maybe ur ryt.. cause would be better.