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Plague

The sweet promises of yesterday on the whispers of the wind
Do not quite stifle the possibilities that others do send
There are those who disregard the warnings of time past
Have no doubt that we who know will be sure to look fast
For out of the past will surely come a fell terror
With the one that was chosen to be its bearer

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  • N e a r
    February 3, 2008

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    Hmmmmm. This is intriguing.
    Very interesting.
    "Have no doubt that we who know will be sure to look fast" ~ I like this line the best.

    Thanks for sharing & entering your write in A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    October 11, 2007
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    Ohhhh my you are good

    thanks for entering my contest, good poem you've written here, now just because IF i dun choose you to win doesn't mean you're not a winner...you are, because this write is good....i'll just have to judge others' pieces...so i'll see about this work and how to award you...


  • luckynsincere
    October 10, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I hope you are enjoying the site. This is a great start here on this site Do not be afraid to play with your lines... Rhyme is not a must in poetry, and some spots here really could be polished around the edges. Just a little rough from the forced rhyme. Other than that I enjoyed. If you need anything at all please do not hesitate to ask. Again... these are merely opinions, and should not hender your proceedings here the sky is the limit And welcome to the site. I know you will meet lots of wonderful friends here

    Always,
    Melanie


  • Canis Lupus
    October 10, 2007
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    Great poem, yeah I'll second that!


  • Not pretty enough
    October 9, 2007
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    hey this is good for being new you aint that bad really nice i like it


  • wanderingstarlet
    October 9, 2007

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    i think you did well with your first poem. I reread it a couple times, but nonetheless sometimes the greatest poetry is those read over and over. good job and welcome to AP!


  • Androgyneric
    October 9, 2007

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    Interesting first poem. Very good! Hope you enjoy your stay at AP, friend! Also, I love your username... Cloud rules!

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