A master to the deepest parts of me
nothing hidden from his eyes to see
hurt emotionally and physically in every way
take me away from their chastizing ways
I can feel your stare in the nexus of my soul
to be the one next on your list to pay the toll
I face you and beg you to stay
fear means nothing to me I say
you are the genisis of my life
take my hand and make me you wife
raise up the blade reflecting the moon light
now I stand, to fall soon
Death is everything to me
his lustuous torment I pray thee
to be violated sensually.
Life is death, Death is life.
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I liked this piece, it portrayed meanings and emotions. Keep up the good work, and I'll be hoping to read more of your writes soon.
All the best,
~Stephi-Dawne~
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lovely erotic poem!!!love it!!
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loved it
"hurt emotionally and physically in every way
take me away from their chastizing ways"
those lines are brilliant... i loved ur poem so much
"I face you and beg you to stay
fear means nothing to me I say"
loved those lines as well, your rhyming was good... keep up the good writes
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awesome write
i loved the rhthym of the poem, it flowed very nicely. i also loved the word choice. i loved the lines
I can feel your stare in the nexus of my soul
to be the one next on your list to pay the toll
the word choice in these lines was excellent. amazing. -
Okay I disgree with this. Death is a part of life, I admit that and a part we all get to know eventually. But your entire life should not be centered around death. You penned this beautifully, I just don't like the subject.
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This is good poetry if a little too auto-biographal
I love some of the lines in this poem-very good imagery as shown in, 'raise up the blade reflecting the moon....'. The poem has a good rythm. It reads well spoken out loud.
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