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Please!

We dance in the crowd so close
touching, tracing our bodies curve
now dancing closer than before
you wonder softly on up my thigh
now my body aches and I want more
a passionate kiss releases me
with eyes embrace I beg
PLEASE

Carried away by our senses delight
I follow you to a room above the noise
here lovers fill their night with play
unable to control your kisses, I want more
in frantic moves we go on
my corset removed, my dress falls
your black shirt undone and pants gone
endless motion of kisses and touch
I pull back and beg
TAKE ME NOW, PLEASE

Now we lost the time and where
our bodies crash horizontally in place
sweat covers us from our burning fire
feel me, pound me, hungry for more
head tilted back I cry
I AM YOURS

For one wild moment my neck you bite
in that instant our bodies heighten to peak
one last scream of sensual taste
now we lay
now we sleep.

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  • Dashed Hopes1992
    October 9, 2007
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    Lustfull poem. very nice on all accounts.

  • karmacae
    October 9, 2007
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    This is beautiful. Great job here. Love it kept me reading from start to end....


  • wishing-well
    October 9, 2007
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    beautiful, makes me want to grab my lover and have beautiful passionate sex!