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We should be together

Memories
of you and me,
holding hands
feeling free.

Walking together
alone in parks,
kissing softly
after dark.

I still want us
to be together,
we can get through
this stormy weather.

Who gives a shit
what others think?
Without you
I am on the brink.

My love is strong,
but on my own
I am so weak
feel so alone.

Please take me back,
return my love;
because your hand
is my hands glove.



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Angelina Avaritia

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  • camus gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    You are a romantic, aren't you ? This poem is sweet and simple, the way love should be but not the way it is lol. I guess that may mean that you are an idealist rather than a realist - if so, good for you Sarah Jane. You are right to not give a "shit" what others think as they are often the biggest hypocrites around. Liked the glove image too. Tony x