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Words and Innocence

Words of a living Pastor,
Listen to the Wind.
Close your eyes and follow me
Your son, your wife, your King.
Take my hand,
I'll hold your heart,
You'll not follow me for wisdomed words.
No more the sin than the saint.
Just innocence and unspoken words.

~~ Aito Vanhoren

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Just an odd little piece n_n

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  • burdened
    October 9, 2007

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    Oooooooooh, Aito, this is really pretty!! Ooooooh!! Okasan told me, or was it gemmy?... that you were this way artistic!! Liky very much so... "Your son, your wife, your King" <--- love that line.... XxxxxX


  • Tarja
    October 9, 2007

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    I never felt very comfortable in the presence of a pastor. I don't have any horrible sins nor do I have any bad experiences with one.. but for some reason I have always felt this way. Hm... well interesting piece. How do you pronounce your name?

    • Daichi
      October 9, 2007
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      My Screen name? Or the name at the bottom of the poem?

      Daichi - Die-chee ((as in cheese))

      Aito - Eye-toe

      n_n

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