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Haiku - Hope


weakened by sun's heat
hope glimmers in new rainfall
dreams of luscious crops

 

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  • myron silver member
    March 1

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    harvest

    Hi there Sarah - . I hope these hopes are harvested.
    Thanks for sharing this poem.

    Also, look forward to seeing you complete the Beginning Haiku Class, when you are ready to go back to it.

    Cheers,
    Myron.


  • Never Fall in Love
    October 19, 2007

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    Awww this is so serene and beautiful, that second line is magical - one of the best haikus I have read. Luscious crops make for a luscious poem. Great work

    Never ♥


  • Theroseislovely
    October 9, 2007

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    What a delight

    To get to read such a wonderful haiku, it was an honor. You write with great articulation, and wonderous beauty. Thanks for sharing.


    • SarahD
      October 14, 2007
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      Thankyou for such a wonderful comment on my haiku! That means so much to me!