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Fairy of Teeth

Fangs shine beneath purple lips,
Sneering as her fingers snake beneath my pillow.
She pulls out the tooth,
clasping it between her crooked fingers.
A cackle, then a cruel smile,
as her hair dances like spiders.
Her acrid breath creeps across my face,
her lips beside my ear.
“Close your eyes and sleep away,
Unless you want to come and play.”

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  • Darkslight
    October 9, 2007
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    EEK

    I love fairies. This creeped me out a little. I like the last 2 lines.