the chill of the fall air
soothes and pacifies me
the brillance of the stars
gleams through the velvety sky
as this night's breezes
swallow me
we are all so small...
yet there's so much to say
when this midnight atmosphere
becomes an ocean
made for us
{yes, the ones who write}
the ones who can't sleep
because there's so much
in our heads
that might be lost while dreaming
all i need
is paper and pen,
your love to fuel my emotions
{my muse}
and the night sky
to keep me wondering
A contest entry
- Unique and Flowing by OnlyOneLifeToLive.
402 points, ended October 11, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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...you're so "write"...I'm "doing" homework, too. hehehehe.
congrats on the trophy!
-Pap.
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I really like this poem and very glad you entered it. Really great write, I love the way it flows. Great job! Thanks for entering!
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HAHA hellll yes! I can definitely relate to this this one! haha... It's 1:30 AM on a school night, and here I am, reading your poetry and writing my own. This piece was appropriately titled, that's for sure. Thanks for sharing.
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Ah yes, the insomniac writer, I can very much relate.
I know I comment a lot on your poems, but what can I say? You're my favorite poet. :-P
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I really love this, I read it aloud, and did so several times...it is sweet, speaks to my heart, made me feel like something I would say...perfect for the ones who write...enjoyed this very much
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