I have observed from a distance
and read your poems. You are no
ordinary girl. You are a prize! A one
in a million girl in my eyes!
I've told you that before and lapped
those words up like your lovely cats
love milk. And you believe me! You
know you are special. You know there
is more to be had than what's been
before
You are a sensuous beautiful woman
with qualities all your own, and such
gentleness, and passion within! You
sit upon a throne! As far as I'm
concerned, you stand above the rest
No one can compete with your loyalty;
and love, it is the best. Oh lady of my
heart believe you deserve the love
to receive, and I'll give you the love
You so deserve! For I know your heart
There is a part missing, and I will be
kissing, that Sleeping Beauty inside you
and making love come to life like
never before. I am passionately
in love with you just as you are
My radiant queen, my shining star
Of worth and beauty, best by far
And I will love you as you have
deserved for so long, and love
You forever, as if it was
Eternity!
Author notes
Dedicated to my AP sister.There are some gems among women and men that underestimate their value, their unconditional love.If any woman needs to know, and fall in love it is this Queen of hearts!
A contest entry
- Make Me Fall in Love... by trista.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice poem
this is verice what you say about your ap sister. like a very nice person and you have such love and frindship for her with very kind words an praise.she must be very special. your praie for otes is ery overwelming.yo to are a gem.
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This is such a beautiful poem. Very sweet. I think this is beautiful. Well done. Kais =)
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My radiant queen, my shining star
Of worth and beauty, best by far
And I will love you as you have
deserved for so long, and love
You forever, as if it was
Eternity!
Ah..what a great tribute is here..a heart warming piece indeed...
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What a way to "spot light" your friend. Proudly exposing her through your poetry is a wonderful gift. I am sure she will be pleased. Nice write.
Kelli -
'You sit upon the throne
.......................
There is a part missing,
and I will be kissing
that Sleeping Beauty inside you'
I liked the above tremendously...
What beautiful and pure emotions!
Each word reflects your attachment, your love and your passion for the noble soul you're talking about.
It looks like a love letter. If it is...then what a letter, my dear!
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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Ahh. So cute. You have one lucky AP sister, to know someone with such a loving heart
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Excellent poem you have penned here. You definitely have a way with words (I have notice from the poems I have read by you), you are an excellent writer, and your writing are amazing.
I really did enjoy this one. It had such amazing flow and goodness about it. Hehe. Is 'goodness' even a word.
Anyways, i really enjoyed reading your poetry
Great job!
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sweet
this was really sweet... the girl in this poem is lucky to have a guy like you write one for her! Excellent write! I loved the way it all came together...
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This blew me away really. I was so caught up in the poem that i couldn't stop reading. I enjoyed the form... it was different and there were lots of internal rhymes (which i happen to love). You've done a wonderful job at showing how much she means to you without sounding cheesy.... wellll doneeeee
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Wonderful =)
I love the third stanza, this poem was captivating and wonderful. Cheers to a good write!
-Liv -
Congrats on the honorable mention. This was a very sweet piece for your AP sister! I do not think that I have really had any interaction with her myself but she sounds like a wonderful person! The way you have described your feelings in this, really reminded me of my feelings for my sister, in real life, Samantha!
Sisters are such pests but such blessings! Thank you for the read and again congrats.
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I really like this!
Such beautiful words! Such passion, the composition
and flow was great.congrats on the honorable win!
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Hi Sis,
You are such a sweetheart to write this for me.
Awww...and you even put something about my cats in there! 
Thank you for making me believe in love again. I was feeling very cynical when I started this contest but knew my fellow AP poets could lift my spirits back up.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
Much love,
~J.
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Great poem, and great praise goes to you and her. Nice job of writting.
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Lovely,
A beautifully inscribed piece my friend, what loving you share from line to line.. Thanks for sharing here, and this is awesome.
You keep up the great works, and I wish ya all the best within the contest as well.
Peace, Timothy
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