The body just lays there
In the open field
For the whole world to see
A beauty so pure
Life that is no more
A murder to some
A blessing to few
Evil still remains in the air
With the scent of blood
The knife right next to her
Her dress ripped
With panties around her ankle
No one cares about the tragic event
Only that the evil girl is dead
Still there is that one
One person that thinks it ain't right
When she speaks up
Something bad happens
The next night
Same happens again
Only this time
An innocent dies
But still no one cares
Just blushes it away
Like all the others
Author notes
My favortive band HIM's new cd Venus Doom inspired me..
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This one really moved me. Very emotional. Good job!
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Very good
i thought this a very good poem, really sad. But i think your right though, whether you intended to make a political point in anyway i dont know, but i did think it was very good. Keep writing and take care x
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