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Reality

All the world a candy store
a swirl of colorful temptation
All the sweets to smother the meat
of utter fabrication

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 14, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'day matronmedusa

    Very true !
    Great poem Short, simple and completely to the point

    I look forward to reading more from you
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda