this little boy
made a mistake
seating himself
on angry chairs
forever
trying
to change the shape
of her face...
A contest entry
- Quickie, 30 minutes, 10 entries, 20 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
550 points, ended October 9, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 25 Words Or Less - Prewrites Allowed!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol strangest pic in the world...
love the wording though...that dude looks like tom riddle! -
Great poem.
Congratulations on the gold.
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Beautifully written, loved it
Hugs, Bunny
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A very deep and well penned take on the prompt my friend. Best wishes in the comp
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this is great
you did an awesome job here
your words made me feel the anger
Riftkin -
I liked the imagery of this, you painted a really pretty picture that reminds me of soft fall days.
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Prompt: A piece of mine that I like: Take it where you will.
Gone With The Wind
the wind caught her skirt
tossing it wildly,
casting long shadows,
on dew kissed grass
dainty undergarments
whispering softly,
beckoning
come hither
emotions lay tangled,
beneath a crisp
linen shirt
arms searching
pulling the fabric
towards me,
to bury my face
in her scent
intoxicating
was the touch
until I felt
emptiness
tears floating in eyes,
staring at your clothes,
draped from the line
instead of
your body
for you had flown
upon the wind
your garments
now soaring,
behind you...
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