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you make me relieze

you make me relieze that we belong to each other
our hearts are apart but ill always know were together
your my favorite guy
when i see you make me shinne so bright
oh i finally relieze



if you tell me, im so so sorry
and i told you, you need to call me
and oh baby plz dont go away



you make me relieze
 



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I made this as a song put im putting it in a poem.

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  • tara wilson gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    Aww..this is such a sweet song - what a great idea, it makes a beautiful poem too... I love it..i will send it to a friend


  • TXCowgirl
    October 11, 2007

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    I love the way I can hear the music to this in my head. I think you definately have a flare for writing lyrics along with poetry. You have expressed your emotions wonderfully and clearly.
    ~TXCowgirl