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Flowers

hyacinths holding dewdrops,
lilacs in lonesome field,
violets speckling grassy vast--

none endear
like baby girl
in purple, Sunday dress

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  • Mirthryl
    October 9, 2007

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    Beautiful thought, carefully caught and lovingly penned! Puts me in mind of the Easter dresses my Mom always sewed for us. Then it reminded me of that photographer who did those wonderfully creative and beautiful infant photos--Gueddes? Charming write!


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    Ohhhh how beautiful, I loved the comparisons, so wonderfully written that you can almost see her smiling. Hugs, Bunny


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007

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    This is absolutely perfect and would have a gold trophy by it if it was in my contest. Thanks for sharing this beautiful verse with me... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    Wow,

    Very creative, and lots of imagery painted upon this poetic page.. Very beautiful indeed my friend, thanks for sharing you, peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x