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The Start Of the Rest Of Your Life

You could hear the bells ring out.
Stricking noon.
You could see cars dressed up in ribbon,
As they passed by.
You could smell the flowers,
Pinkand crip, freshly picked.

You could touch the booklet,

It said our names in fancy scipt.

When it was time,

You turned and saw me,

In a overprice but special dress.

I could almost touch you,

Iwanted that kiss.

You looked so hansome,

Standing there.

Now we are here,

That day was the start of,

The rest of our lives.



 

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  • Dlvvanzor
    October 15, 2007
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    Awww! That was cute! A lovely memory.

    Thanks for entering,
    -Dlvvanzor


  • Sara Bellem
    October 13, 2007

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    Beautiful

    I love this, its breathtakingly the way I felt on our special day. Thank you so much for entering this contest of mine. It means more than you can possibly know. Its so wonderful to read something that reminds you of such a beautiful memory.