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You Always Get In Between

My heart an anvil
sorrow the hammer;
destiny that hand
readied to strike;
you are my hero
slipped in-between.

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  • goalsv
    October 9, 2007
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    Loved it. very easy to see your point in this one, nice job.


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 9, 2007

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    ok i read this twice and can't see where purple strikes a chord but maybe it's just me ~shrugs~ be well and be blessed


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    How creative and original. Great take on the prompt... x