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Love Notes


my love

was quietly folded

away

 

before you

 

gently opened

and pressed

my creases

 

fanning

lavender

love notes

 

into symphonies

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20 words

A contest entry

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  • Amera gold member
    October 11, 2007

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    Wow! I'm a little late on commenting on this but I see why it won gold. This is fantastic. This poem says so much more than the picture you provided.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Fire N Ice
    October 10, 2007
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    A very well deserved gold!!!!!
    absolutly beautiful


  • Ibius
    October 10, 2007

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    Congrats on the Gold beautiful spirit, well deserved. This is beautiful..
    Hugs, love and light
    Kat xx


  • Namita
    October 9, 2007

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    WOW WOW. Just wow. This is such a beautiful poem. And this means origami to me too... wonderful write very very much deserving of gold. You remind me of Nicolette.

    ~Candy


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    Beautiful as I knew it would be. Congrtulations on the Gold, it was meant for you.
    Your lovely words flow so beautiful in purple. I am always in awe of their beauty.
    Love to you,
    sis


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 9, 2007

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    seems the word oragami comes to mind when reading this congrats on the gold. be well and be blessed


  • crimsondew
    October 8, 2007
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    Very beautiful..Congrats onthe gold!


  • checkmate
    October 8, 2007

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    Wow. This was so beautiful. Deeply sensual!

    I oved this piece! A very deserving gold winner! Congratulations


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    This is beautifully divine and sincerely captivating. Loved it!.. x


    • Tam
      October 8, 2007
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      Thank you very much!

      I am humbled by your words and the gold tin.
      You always have the BEST contests...prompts, pics, always appeal to my muse! LOL
      Have a great night!
      Tammy


  • rebeka
    October 8, 2007
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    wow, this is so romantic and magical too, i want my honey to press my creases! sorry, couldnt help meself

    i love this, really, it is sensual and somehow, it has the illusion of fragrance, sexy like Chanel, or Blue...how did you make this smell so good ?


    • Tam
      October 8, 2007
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      LOL

      Thank you beautiful poetess!
      I'm not sure how this "music" filled write...I thought...LOL...became so sensual...
      BUT I LIKE IT!
      ummm...my Muse may need to write to Dr. Phil...
      Blessings! Tammy


      • rebeka
        October 9, 2007

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        woohoo, a new trinket! congrats for golden writing, i knew when i read this how much magic it has. that purple-lovin muse of yours is on to something. truely, one of the most softly sensual writes i have read in a while..you might need to let that purple ink flow on this topic more often girly. congrats again on a superb writing Tam.

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