coloring the sunset skies
the color of the eyes
I have fallen in love with
painting my world
-pale purple-
Author notes
20 words
A contest entry
- Create magic in 20 words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended October 8, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a very neat take on the color prompt here love! Nicely penned lines of hope beyond the pale.
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This is quite sincerely divine... x
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AHH!!! sweet! this was another lovely poem! I loved the way u began it and ended this piece! bravo! Oh and the background went well too... best of luck in the contest!
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wow!
imagine pale pyrple yes. I actually want to try the purple coloured contact lenses. but anyway, this poem was very simple sticking to only the sunset and eye yet it seemed rather loving towards the end
the last two lines were brilliant. it's as if you are engulfed in this person's eyes.
brilliant!
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Interesting... well done!
All the best!
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