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Bits of Pain



purple, the spirit

of a moonlit sky

and stifling eclipse

as seen in my eyes

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colored in bits of pain


 

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20 Words
Prompt: PURPLE

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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 9, 2007

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    this brings many emotions and many questions to my heart and mind very sadly wonderful my sister. i would have attached a trophy to this myself. be well and be blessed


  • Midnight Lace
    October 9, 2007

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    First off I must say that the background you have chosen goes quite well with not only the poem but the prompt that the poem was done off of. You have penned such a mesmerizing poem in such few of words. I wish you the best of luck in your contest
    Smoochie


  • TXCowgirl
    October 8, 2007

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    This is very thought provoking and the ending is simply superb. This is one that should be savored and cherished and stored in an old cigar box, the kind you store away high up on a shelf, to be taken down, opened up and read over and over again... savored anew. This was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you. Keep that pen handy dear poet.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    Such a thought provoking and mesmerizing write... x