A flash in the sky
and its gone in an instant.
followed by the enormous
groan of nature.
The rain is slick
I can barely see the road.
How does the sky always
express what I cannot?
The torrents of water
are almost enough
to drown my sorrows
and carry them away.
The sky screams
what my heart feels.
Lashing out
against everything beautiful.
It tears at the heart
of the earth,
just as i long
to tear yours to pieces.
The one thing different
about us is the rain
is always forgiving,
and I never give in.
Author notes
numero 2, but kinda a little bit everything, almost. lol my name is BeMyThunder
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Comments
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IMAGERY
great, great imagery
i like the fact this poem makes you think ( show not tell )
my favorite stanza is ...
The sky screams
what my heart feels.
Lashing out
against everything beautiful
loved it ^
thank you and good luck
morgan
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very nice =] it's a very good description of rain and love/hate relationship. I love it =]
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