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Bruised

Heart turns purple
with every beat that
it's away from you.
Purple and blue; bruised
with the pain of loss.

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Prompt: Purple

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  • Arizona Sunset
    October 9, 2007

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    very battered heart...can feel this pain...excellent take on the prompt, and you have penned this with tons of imagery. best to you in the contest! loved it


  • Mykeee
    October 8, 2007

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    Ouch!! I can feel the pain and the
    visual of discoloration. This is
    the second poem a read with the Purple prompt.
    Well done and good luck ~Mkeeeeeeee


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    A sad take on the prompt, very moving indeed!.. x

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    This is sad but it is a very nice emotional piece thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love


  • crimsondew
    October 8, 2007
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    I like this ...Like how you have chosen purple for missing someone..
    All the best!

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