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Lies

In careless echoes of torn truth
I have been deceived once again

The promises dancing from you
are carried away by a brisk wind

You should have spoken them more strongly
Or perhaps I shouldn't have held to them so tightly

Then maybe they wouldn't have taken
another piece of me with them.

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  • IfOnlyLifeWereFair
    October 14, 2007
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    AMEN SISTa!

    I can identify. it's short, sweet, and to the point. Hallelujah!!!!