brilliant hues
of purple
in the evening sky
while slowly munching
on a plum
I feel like royalty
wouldn't you too?
A contest entry
- Create magic in 20 words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended October 8, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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AWW! this was cute... i imagined u as a queen munching on a plum!!! funny funny! good luck in the contest!


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So lovely - beautiful imagery within... x
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Beautiful.
Simply amazing. I already feel like royalty

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Like it
Very well written ..Simple and yet catchy..
All the best!

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Sweet,
Such a wonderfully inscribed piece with so much imagery it's Yummy!
THanks for sharing, and all the best within the contest! Peace, Timothy~


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