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royal mayhem

brilliant hues
of purple
in the evening sky

while slowly munching
on a plum

I feel like royalty
wouldn't you too?

A contest entry

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 8, 2007

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    AWW! this was cute... i imagined u as a queen munching on a plum!!! funny funny! good luck in the contest!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    So lovely - beautiful imagery within... x


  • checkmate
    October 8, 2007

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    Beautiful.

    Simply amazing. I already feel like royalty


  • crimsondew
    October 8, 2007
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    Like it

    Very well written ..Simple and yet catchy..
    All the best!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    Sweet,

    Such a wonderfully inscribed piece with so much imagery it's Yummy! THanks for sharing, and all the best within the contest! Peace, Timothy~

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