Bottling vivacious fructiferous bounty
of lavish lush luxuriant pears
in sweetened concoction
and preservatives
-perfect exempli gratia of purple patch.
Author notes
20 words- purple
In a list
A contest entry
- Create magic in 20 words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended October 8, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lol............I love all them big words I can not even pronounce, just pass me the darn jam........... wow what a plumish write
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Lets say we share it half and half...
Thanks for stopping by!
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You are making my mouth water! Beautiful alliteration. A lot of fun.
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Thanks a lot!
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This was cute. And U took it from purple. How good was that? nicely done ~ Mykey
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I never thought I would write something like this myself, but the effort paid off..Thanks...
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Deeply intriguing and creative - love your wording... x
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Thanks
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Wow. This was so lovely. I read this out loud and I got my tongue twisted lol
This was really nice. I love the allteration, especially the second and last line.
ooh- this was just simply amazing
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thanks a lot for your comment...
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Ohhh this is very well written!! I love the alliteration and the overall flow. Best wishes
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Thanks a lot for your lovely review...
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I like this alot. I like jams and jellies thank you for shairng this piece with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love
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Glad you enjoyed it..Thanks for the wishes dear....
And nest time you eat jam or jelly remember me...
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