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...a certain peace within...

until we look within ourselves,
we will place our lives in the hands of another.
until we take responsibility for our lives,
we will place blame on somebody else.
until we live with the love of life,
we will hate, and live with jealousy.
religion will never go away.
we are physical beings,
whom at any time of our evolvement,
question - why am i here?
why aren't  i happy?
is there more to life than ... this ?
we will look to the stars and to nature
and look to the person speaking,
who talks to our vulnerabilities and egos.
we will listen to what ever and who ever
resonates with our thoughts -
to find a certain peace within.




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  • marrow
    October 26, 2007

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    you seem to have a nice control over these thoughts, and i admire that. it rings strong in this poem. j


  • sultan gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    So true ...

    And in plain fact ... this is the real internal world regardless of religion. Thanks for the 'light'. Love, Sultan


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    Wow,

    Another fine piece here, I have been reading a few views in the contest here, and I'm learning lots.. Thanks for sharing your insight. Peace, Timothy


    • glispa
      October 9, 2007
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      thankyou for your comments it is interesting what is being written hmm ?