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shades of regret

I remember that purple sweater
you left on the subway
and how you cried
now I’m sorry I didn’t care.

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  • mamanmummy
    October 17, 2007
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    You always knew how to, in few words, say so much!!!!


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 9, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so sad and tellING LIKE ONE OF THOSE, "IF I KNEW THEN WHAT I KNOW NOW" TYPES OF THINGS oppps sorry about the caps be well and be blessed


  • BlueNote27
    October 8, 2007
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    Nice. I love it.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 8, 2007
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    This has quite an abundance of feeling to it and speaks volumes in so few words... x


  • TwilightDazzles
    October 8, 2007

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    Omg, I don't know why but this made me With such few words you were able to envoke this sadness within me. Excellent job!!!

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