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Eternal Skies

Even though it's been so long
I'll fill the sky up with this song.
As long as you haunt my memory
I'll make sure you never forget me.

Over days and weeks and time eternal
All your smiles will turn regretful
And every laugh and tear you shed
Will be for words you wish you'd said.

This song will choke the radio waves
And fill you for the rest of your days
And every  dream of what will be
Will turn to hopes of seeing me.

This song will fill the sky with tears
And shame will fill your final years.
And though you have forgotten me
This song will jar your memory.

Though pictures and letters were thrown away
I'll make you remember every day.
The sky will fill with this hurting song
And you will remember all your wrongs.

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  • weebabycole
    October 12, 2007
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    this is really good.

    like this xx