The depth to her soul matched deep peridot eyes and passer biers turned. Her canary pink Porsche and pink-diamonded finger advertised unkept freedom.
The truck driver looked down focusing on her, eyes undressing the black lacy number covering her soft curves, almost modestly. Her hemline rose as she pressed her foot, disappearing in a tease.
In a list
A contest entry
- In Honor Of Diamond! by TooRainbow.
475 points, ended October 25, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah how this leaves the mind to the imagination. This is surely one that can expand into a pleasurable adventure.
I guess its true, big things can come in little packages.
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I so enjoy those very short stories. They always leave the readers with their own lines behind.
You did very well with this one!
Mari
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Thank you Ms Mari, you are kind. Love the hat.
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I like this little mini story. Its just enough to get my imagination going. Pink porche, pink diamond... I think I am seeing some symbolic feminine power. Or am I reading too much into this? Makes me want to go buy a new pink lipstick. LOL
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Thank you Sarah, I'm thinking pink is your colour.
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Ooolaaaalaaa
I love these little mini stories of yours
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Thank you Ms Huntress, it's kind of you to drop by.
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loved it! loved it! good luck in the contest.
blu
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Ms Renee, I've said it before, you are very kind.
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The unkept freedom is holding my eyebrows up in curiosity.. refusing to let go.. Teased indeed.. this is just a peek at her.. tell us more (not the way the truck drivers wants though)
Best wishes in the contest
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Thank you Ms Me, you are very kind to this scribbler. I think you know her well, there is a little of her in your heart, she lives in all of you. Not me, I'm in the truck (I think)
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hmm.. so here too I *shake my head with a gentle smile*
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Ohhh i want a canary pink porche... seeings as my new car got hail damage yesterday!!!!!! (curse, curse)
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Oh Poor Ms Emme... I saw that storm on the radar and felt good when it turned away (Sorry). You know, I can see you in that Porsche (and Maty.. even the hounds would go with you) - sell more bits. (and) Thank you.
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Double Bravo!
Now that's what I'm talking about! A short story, with a captivating and stunning metaphor. If I do say so myself, I could have sworn that you were that devilish truck driver with the penetrating eyes. I love this, thank you Wattle. Avril
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Thank you Ms Diamond, I would stare at a pink Diamonded finger too.
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ahah, now I know what you are doing on the road
Whatching Porsches
Lovely write,
Good luck in this contest,
XXJeannette
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Thank you Ms Wolfy, I can see you driving a pink convertable.
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Bravo!
Now that's a story! You have quite captured a slice of this woman's life and served it up for all to enjoy. Great work on this! Thank you!
Sheryl
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Thank you Sheryl, she is deserving of every word. She has class and charm on her side.
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I love Pink and I definately Love Diamonds
this is wonderful my friend wattle.
Great entry, I must say. A lot of imagery in such a short write, even more powerful.
Southern Belle
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Thank you Ms Belle, you are always kind to this poor old scribbler.
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awesome wattle!! for moi??
this definately deserves a trophy
Tasha
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Ms Tash, I hope someone opens doors for you. Thank you.
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