Beautiful girl with breath-taking eyes,
Starring above at the starry night skies.
Snow falling down, covering the ground,
layer it up- It'll be days till she's found.
White covered lands, glisten with magic.
Blood red berries bouncing off branches.
Droplets falling on stunning lashes,
this is where she scattered the ashes.
Frozen mind, ice cold heart.
Pierces any living soul. That is her art.
Trapped and tormented. She loves to Kill.
Finally now she swallows that pill.
Long black wavering hair, shines in the light.
Floats in the wind, catching the snow.
Her lushes lips, slightly parted. Sultry.
A woman of the night, finally letting go.
Blowing a kiss to the baby she lost.
Midnight winds beginning to frost.
Hush a bye baby, she'll be with you soon.
Then you'll both be free to watch the moon.
Snow surrounding the forest,
masking the evil and the sorrow.
Painting a picture of innocence and purity
She's glad she won't awake tomorrow.
Sun shinning apon the snow.
How was anyone to really know,
that she felt so horrificly alone
That family of hers, once finding the truth, were quick to disown.
A contest entry
- Picture Perfect by Narcissus In Chains.
700 points, ended November 13, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Picture 4-Lady Winter http://www.sultryrose.net/images/Pretty.jpg
Comments
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A good story line to this. It flows nicely, the rhyme is a little forced in some areas but overall it is a very good piece and I enjoyed reading it.
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excellent imagery on your poem, you could feel the pain of this poem, I enjoyed reading this poem and thank you for sharing
~blessings~ and best to you in the contest. 
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im sorry, that was a mistake, hope this is ok,
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Put the picture link in the notes, not the poem again. More comment later.
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