Medication gone, my mind is growing stronger,
Dedication done, my days are growing longer.
Destined hopes, so far away and yet so close to feel,
Jesting gropes in fields of grey, sustain me with their zeal.
Immortal thoughts and demon song possess my waking mind,
A portal caught in semen strong assess my quaking bind.
Darkened thoughts and shadows cold, I touch upon the void,
Harkened naught and mad behold, so much has been destroyed.
Agitate and feral needs, suppress the beast within,
Vegetate and peril feeds, oppress, bequeath, give in.
A reckoning not far away, to cleanse and bleach the mind,
Beckoning a worthy prey, so dense in breach decline.
Forsaken ghosts of shadows past arise in slumbers void,
Awaken most in shadows cast, despised in lumbers toyed.
A new day dawns upon my mind, dispelling wisps of fear,
A clue that mourns my shadows bind, expelling lisps and tears.
To face a foe of inner born, eternal fates unkind,
To place a blow that sinners mourn, external hates decline.
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Oh my lordy!
Wowzer!! What rhyme!! Never have I seen rhyme done so perfectly. Is this a form? You have taken poetry to a whole new level here IMHO. The most gripping piece I have ever read. As for the rhyme...
...speechless! Truly an outstanding write and a pleasure to read 
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Thanks!!!
I'm surprised you found this one, its one of the first ones I posted. Lol!
Not sure if it is form, maybe? I just got it in my head to try it as a style of writing...
Thanks again,
Take care,
Fritz.........
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Hehe I find everything
Best poem I've read ever this one! Really adore the rhyme! Can it go in my hall? Save me searching next time I want to read it
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Thanks!!!
And yes, please do put it in your hall, it would be my honour... -
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It is in there
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Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Such an interesting voice you've laid; in diction yes but the phrase concocted - well played.
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effective
you do paint a dark picture with your words and describe the harder part of lonliness quite well... i really like the line, "forsaken ghosts of shadows past arise in slumbers void," you speak of shadows and voids quite a bit
nice job, once again.
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G'dat Fritz O skennick
Wow. Powerfully tragic.
You have a way of capturing the reader from beginning to end, well penned
Stay safe
Enjoy AllPoetry
~Amanda
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This is fantastic!
I love the way you write
There's too many 'favo' lines
to quote back to you..
I am quite impressed with all of them!
~Pastel
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thank you, it is appreciated...
cheers,
fritz.............
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