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All this time

All this time, I tried to make you see.
What its like to be me.
The drink made you violent,
I suffered in silence.
Look what you’ve done to me.

All this time, I told you how I feel.
That the pain you caused was real.
My need was to love you,
Tell me, what did I do.
To make you hate me so.

All this time, all I tried to do.
Get some respect from you.
You treated me badly,
And I loved you madly.
Look what you’ve done to me.

All this time, I worked to pay life’s fees.
For what’s not meant to be.
The voices have spoken,
And my heart is broken.
Look what you’ve done to me.



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Author: Fritz O'Skennick

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  • xXx Dark Poet xXx
    October 31
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    this is sad. i know how u feel.


  • consternation imply
    July 13

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    TRUTH

    That feeling that comes with "look what you've done to me" is so familiar to everyone. Excellent emotion.


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    What a lovely, yet heartbreaking write; this is just fantastic. Thankyou so much for entering this piece.

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~


  • live-laugh-love
    September 23, 2008

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    yes Abuse... just not the kind i wanted...
    Thanx 4 ur enter....
    this is a lovely poem! it flows and rhymes well...
    it's just not wat i was looking for


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 11, 2008

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    I can really relate to this... sometimes I wonder whether the people I've been with have known me at all, or whether it's just hopeful thinking. Well written.


  • SchizoChic
    February 27, 2008
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    My heart breaks for you. Good luck.


  • Jai Guru Deva
    January 24, 2008
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    Good job. I liked it.
    Good luck


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    wow indeed many can speak these words you painted in front of us. This spoke to many im sure.
    Best wishes
    Tory


  • kdanielle
    October 19, 2007
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    Thankyou so much for your entry. Great write! Nice rhyme.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Oh wow, this is as real
    and honest as it gets!
    straight from the heart
    I love the vunerability
    in your words.
    I am moved
    ~Pastel


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 15, 2007

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    G'day Fritz O skennick

    a breath-taking sad poem that many people can relate too.

    Stay safe
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    ~Amanda

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