Listening to the
Heavy rain pounding
On the roof above
With steady beats
We're sitting on
A comfortable couch
Enjoying the show
Of bright lightning
And the sounds of
The crashing thunder
Loving the beauty
Of the wild nature
Treasuring the moments
Of being together
During a thunderstorm
Author notes
Option # 3
Jeneralix
A contest entry
- I need.... poems.. by Amorous Arms.
450 points, ended November 17, 2007, 63 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think and whether I should post some more of it
Comments
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i love it. such emotion and love that normally isnt shown with thunderstorms. very nice imagery. wish i could be one of the two =] lovely. best wishes
~Ali
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