His playful actions are deliberate,
as he holds me my body arches to him.
He sinks his teeth into my panties,
my body responds with pleasure.
The thought of what's to come,
leaves my love fluid on the sheets.
He playfully takes them off,
and teasingly nibbles at me.
The feeling is explosive and I beg for entrance.
As he plays, his fingers explore.
Ecstasy arrives and he plunges deep.
We are absorbed in paradise,
his actions send me soaring.
The time is near,
together we climax.
A loving moment,
Never to be forgotten.
Author notes
pic 10
A contest entry
- Delightful Mood Swings Picture Prompt Contest by delightfulmess.
2100 points, ended October 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - give me love, give me passion, give me sex(prewrites allowed) by Viyanna Rosemarie.
400 points, ended October 25, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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EXCELLENT!
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thank you very much for your wonderful entry into this contest. i am wishing you the best of luck in all your future writings and in this contest as well. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Sheesh.... Excellent.... Love this take on that
sensual pic. Well done and thank you for
entering the contest
delila
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This is very hot and steamy. I went and took a look at the inspiration for this one and you did create that picture and send it soaring from there. Two people in love sharing a session of love making that brings us to the heights of ecstasy before climaxing to that moment you so aptly said would never be forgotten. Very well done and best wishes in the contest.
seamaiden ♥
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