I toppled out of bed one day,
Thinking what a life I’ve led.
I looked around and there it was,
A hole inside my head.
This hole reflected on my life,
Of all I’ve done and said.
It proved I have nothing to show,
I’ve lived when I am dead.
BUGGER!!!
Author notes
This poem is from my Gothic Tales CD, to hear it, go to http://www.archive.org/details/TheHoleInMyHead
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A contest entry
- Write a Short Silly Poem - Paying It Forward Contest by poetrandy.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love the ending
God bless you...
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cool piece! I loved the last line, I always swear in caps too! lol!
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Fun!
Cute & Silly! Good luck in the contest!
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Hehe wicked write hunni...love the humour here! Reminds me of a saying I use a lot 'I'll miss it like a hole in the head'..lol Awesome read hun
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G'day Fritz O skennick
The last couple of poems of yours had me in tears this one made me stop and
I reckon that's what my head will be like
Stay safe
Enjoy AllPoetry
~Amanda
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