So tired, so wired,
Can’t close my eyes and settle.
My mind defined,
My blood tastes sharp like metal.
I wander far inside my mind,
A door ajar, a path that winds.
Questions, questions, thoughts and deeds,
So weak, so meek, so full of needs.
My throat so dry, my eyes they hurt,
My head like lead, my mind alert.
Outside the corner of my eye,
The shadows move and dance and fly.
I hear the voices call my name,
So full of hate, so full of blame.
I need a fag, I need to sleep,
I need a drink, I need to weep.
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wow! amazing and beautiful. I get like that.
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Wow - I can so relate to this! Sounds like my night the other night...lolol...
anyways - great wording, emotion and flow in this. The unsettled mind certainly is powerful in these words.
Well done!!
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This is wicked hun, the rhyme blows me away! 'I need a fag' made me smile
Powerful emotions flowing her, confusion portrayed stongly. Superb write hun 
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