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breezes

laugh into the wonders
of the breathing by winds
taking up the leaves
before they all descend
into the grounds they whisper
motionless in life
trapped in all their feelings
like one when he is high
beggin for an answer
in relief of this ones told
the ways of growing up
are outright hard and bold

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  • TacoSexyFail
    October 8, 2007
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    I like this piece. Great vocabulary and structure.