Doe rai me fa so la ti doe
This basic scale
Is the key to joy
Laughter, sadness, anger
But to me it is music
Singing brings me to another world
Filled with sweet tones
Memorizing melodies
Peaceful harmonies
From Rock to blues
Classical to Broadway
Many wonderful secrets
Are hidden in the magic
Of singing
Author notes
UGGGGG this was really hard to write about but I think I did well.
By TwilightWolf,
P.S. Purple bunnies like blue frosting!!!!
A contest entry
- For My Friends ♥ ~ by riasme.
475 points, ended January 9, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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freeverse isn't that easy no more, eh? love how you added the scale in it! great write.
oh yeah and it's do, not doe, sol, not so, and re, not rai.
just a heads up
great awesome write!
♥ sasha ♥
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yay happy!! I love this, it's so descriptive!! I love how you said that singing takes you to other worlds, and also how you started out with do re mi fa sol la ti do
love it!!
lise
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really pretty poem leigh!
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oooh I like it!
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