As a little girl
I loved to spin coins
Pennies, nickles, dimes, and quarters
I just kept spinning them and spinning them
O, why did they always have to stop
They spin in circles but stop so suddenly
And pause for someone to start them again
A spin for a life
round and round we go
At first we start off fast
And grow slower as time goes on
But just like all things
It stops, stops dead cold
Will it have a chance to spin again
Who will pick it up
And twirl it once more?
Author notes
Wrote this for a contest. Since I don't think this fits any other category, I'll go with option 1.
A contest entry
- Wherever you are stop and write! by alexandrathegreat.
1800 points, ended October 24, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So...Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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'A first we start off fast'
The first word should be 'at'. This is original you took the thought of a small object and turned it into the big picture idea. Good work much approved.
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wow this was awesome girly!! I love the underlining message in this!! Great write!!
~Michaela~
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