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Fantasia's Feather



Tender bits of hidden veracity
reflect in spilled ink

outlined with passion across parchment,
mundane obstacles rejuvenates vengeance
of tinkering thoughts,
as fantasies accrual

magical delusions coalesce with reality,
whilst heartbeat sighs silently
in gentle whispers of love

chimera offers tranquility
to long days
pressed against life’s circumstances,
feathering hopes outward

delicately,
fabricating creations~
casting illusionary spells
of a content spirit



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  • Peteskid gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    this is beautiful poetry, sound and word choices, read aloud it is soft and whispery; i especiallky like the feather imagery, so well done; adds a meaning there...PK


  • greyghost
    October 18, 2007

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    A delicate and intricate write of illusion. Casting a spell forward in frabricating creations. Sweet.
    Great poem and awesome title.


  • anaisnais
    October 11, 2007
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    Aww so very lovely in imagery. Peaceful inner beings.Love Anna-Mariexx


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    This is beautiful.....
    The ending is so serene...Every line penned in lovely language and imagery...
    An excellent poem from your beautiful poetic soul!!!


    Lynda